Jasmine Hart

I thought it was great, but I'm not sure about the way you change your tenses, eg "leaned" and "drift" are in contrast, which I think makes it read a ...

It's funny how my words All become so skewed When they earn refuge In your lost treasure casket At last.

I love it, but I'd use a capital M for Michaelangelo! Your imagery is amazing, and the enjambment helped it flow which I think helped create the peaceful nature of ...